第二篇

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(刪除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (刪除)prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　8分

　　同學你好，作文寫的很好，但要注意時態(tài)的選擇。這是過去發(fā)生的事，因此要用過去時。

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