第一類:日常生活
歷年四級(jí)作文話題中,有4篇為日常生活類。
The Tape Recorder
Changes in People's Diet
The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller
My Most Favorite Programme
這些話題都是關(guān)于我們?nèi)粘I钪械淖兓,尤其是物質(zhì)上的變化。有的甚至伴有圖表,讓大家看圖寫作文。
我們先來(lái)看一篇范文:
From the chart we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in people‘s diet. The greatest change occurs in grain consumption, which has dropped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption. The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which increased from 10% in 1986 to 13% in 1990. But on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From 1986 to 1989, meat consumption increased from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%.
What has caused the great changes in people‘s diet? The main reason, I think, lies in the improvement in people‘s income level. With the development of our society, people are becoming richer and richer, which enables them to purchase more nutritious food such as meat and milk. In the meantime, grain consumption in people‘s diet consequently dropped.
So from the analysis, we can draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health.
從范文中我們可以對(duì)這類話題有個(gè)大概了解。日常生活類文章一般可以寫成描述性文章。如果有圖表,那么我們一般需要準(zhǔn)備的工作有一下幾方面:
1.審題
在看到這篇作文要求的時(shí)候,不要盲目的下筆,而是仔細(xì)揣摩一下題目想讓我們表達(dá)哪方面的意思,也就是側(cè)重點(diǎn)。拿上面的范文來(lái)說(shuō),側(cè)重點(diǎn)就是人們生活水平提高了,國(guó)家富強(qiáng)了。那么我們寫作的中心就要圍繞著這個(gè)側(cè)重點(diǎn)而來(lái)。
2.構(gòu)思
在寫之前,心里要有一個(gè)譜-我要寫幾段?每段描寫什么?有什么主題句?這三個(gè)問(wèn)題也是寫其他類型作文的基本步驟。因?yàn)榭荚嚂r(shí)間只有30分鐘,所以不允許我們浪費(fèi)一分一秒。有的考生就是因?yàn)闆](méi)構(gòu)思好,寫到一半想要重新來(lái)寫,結(jié)果時(shí)間不夠,而且卷面很亂,心里最后慌為一團(tuán)。
3.亮點(diǎn)
一篇作文貴在有亮點(diǎn),吸引人。四級(jí)作文評(píng)分時(shí),閱卷老師分配給每篇作文的時(shí)間很短。那么我們就要考慮如何來(lái)用自己的亮點(diǎn)贏得閱卷老師的好評(píng)。這是一個(gè)小小的捷徑。我們可以看一下上面的范文:三段中都圍繞著飲食水平展開。從一個(gè)方面擴(kuò)大到大方向:社會(huì)在進(jìn)步,人民生活水平在提高。其中第二段的第一句話也就是本段的主題句(What has caused the great changes in people‘s diet? The main reason, I think, lies in the improvement in people‘s income level.),用問(wèn)答方式來(lái)寫,與眾不同,會(huì)給閱卷老師極深印象。
框架有了,但里面得需要我們填充內(nèi)容,才能讓整篇作文讀起來(lái)有質(zhì)感。句式,單詞,復(fù)雜句等要配合好。有的同學(xué)平時(shí)背了很多好句子,考試時(shí)一股腦都搬到作文中,但有的句子不一定適合本篇主題。
說(shuō)了這么多,現(xiàn)在我們以:Changes in Mass Media 為題來(lái)練習(xí)一下
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